Feedback to others

I carefully watched and commented on the blogs of the three classmates.

Yu-tong’s content is to introduce life in Australia to international students who come to Australia for the first time, and help international students to adapt to the life of studying abroad.

I think her niche is very good, because the audience for this topic is large and in urgent need. Secondly, her video content and the text information in the blog introduced her DA in great detail, and the content she did was very perfect. Her content is also very inspiring to me, and I think I can also narrow down the audience appropriately and study more specifically which type of audience I want to attract.

The second is siyou’s pitch, she chose to share her handicrafts on Instagram and Xiao hongshu.

I think she draws a very detailed site map of the site. This inspires me a lot because I also share my photos on Instagram. She combines the knowledge learned in the class with the content of the account very well, and the video also describes her research in great detail.

The third is jiang nan’s pitch, he shared Chinese food, providing convenience for Chinese students studying abroad and foreigners interested in Chinese food.

I think he used the lectures well and was clear enough for the audience to understand his digital medium.

I have gained a lot of knowledge by giving this feedback. First of all, I think that if you let others see your work, you will find many problems that you can’t notice. You can better adjust your work based on other people’s feedback. Secondly, when I watch the pitches of my classmates, I will find many deficiencies in myself. I can check and fill in the gaps in my own digital media by observing other people’s digital media.